Фрилансер: jediahbillones
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Hopper Cartoon

Decided to try a different style. I meant to show the "resistance is futile" as if it was a sound leaking from the line--comic style. I would appreciate your feedback on this one!

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  • dladensohn
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    • 2 месяцев назад

    Thank you, Jediah! Very good job on changing the knots and the hook. Adding the fisherman while still emphasizing the grasshopper is very clever. Two suggestions:
    Put the Resistance is Futile back on the fly line, which was excellent and better than the comic style, I think.
    And let the line rest completely on the water; the water current is what causes the fly to drag unnaturally, not the fisherman pulling on the line.
    Minor point: let the line come from the very tip of the fly rod.
    Good job!

    • 2 месяцев назад
    1. jediahbillones
      • 2 месяцев назад

      Thanks for the feedback! I'll see what I can do.

      • 2 месяцев назад