I am looking for a skilled article writer to write up essay about control diet.

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I am looking for a skilled article writer to write up essay about my patent.
I have invention and I have been registed this patent in USPTO.
An essay about a new invention to control someone diet.
You should include these ideas:
• The importance of maintaining the number of calories consumed.
• It is difficult to prevent yourself from enjoying himself with food.
• Introducing the new invention to readers.
• How the new invention works.
• Advantages of new invention.
• The last paragraph: encourages readers to use this invention.
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((The hinge mechanism may be from plastic materials or it may be preferred to make the hinge mechanism from paper material to be biodegradable. Biodegradable is the preferred so that it may be used as fertilizer for plants like used coffee grounds at coffee shops.))
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could you put a paragraph that talk about using this invention from diabetes and hypertension patient for their diet.

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  • pdeb85
    pdeb85
    • 1 неделя назад

    Hello! Please check my essay, entry number 10, and give feedback. Thank you!

    • 1 неделя назад
    1. pdeb85
      pdeb85
      • 6 дня(-ей) назад

      Hello! Please check my revised essay, entry number #17 . I have rewritten it according to your feedback. Thank you!

      • 6 дня(-ей) назад
    2. pdeb85
      pdeb85
      • 1 день назад

      Hello! Please check my revised essay, entry number #21 . I have rewritten it according to your latest feedback. Thank you!

      • 1 день назад
  • ShikhaSheoran
    ShikhaSheoran
    • 3 дня(-ей) назад

    Hi, Kindly check entry #20 and let me know your feedback on it. Thank you!

    • 3 дня(-ей) назад
  • ashikur199660
    ashikur199660
    • 6 дня(-ей) назад

    Hey please wait for me. I will submit. Thank you

    • 6 дня(-ей) назад
  • Estadler
    Estadler
    • 1 неделя назад

    Please check #13 with my adjustments

    • 1 неделя назад
  • Estadler
    Estadler
    • 1 неделя назад

    No, problem. Thanks for the feedback- it enables me to make the adjustments you want.

    • 1 неделя назад
  • Estadler
    Estadler
    • 1 неделя назад

    Hi, Please check my essay and leave feedback. Thank you!

    • 1 неделя назад
    1. naefcom
      Организатор конкурса
      • 1 неделя назад

      Good work.
      could you read my feedback to Pratyush D.
      I like your essay because it's a brief but you need to put some headlines and arrange the paragraph carefully.
      you have putted all pictures nearby to each other.
      and you should put the last paragraph at the end.

      • 1 неделя назад
  • naefcom
    Организатор конкурса
    • 2 недель назад

    thank you so much Marius.
    fantastic essay.

    • 2 недель назад
    1. naefcom
      Организатор конкурса
      • 2 недель назад

      I want some modification in your article:

      you just talk about obesity and the Diseases associated with obesity, could you add a paragraph talk about a perfect body and its importance for a beauty appearance and success in the life.

      In the paragraph 6: you have wrote ( a simple plastic food page) but the device will be made of paper and wood materials. ((The hinge mechanism may be from plastic materials or it may be preferred to make the hinge mechanism from paper material to be biodegradable. Biodegradable is the preferred so that it may be used as fertilizer for plants like used coffee grounds at coffee shops.))

      • 2 недель назад
    2. MariusAlza9
      MariusAlza9
      • 2 недель назад

      Sure, please check my new submission to see the required modifications! Thank your feedback!

      • 2 недель назад
  • ailinemacabuhay
    ailinemacabuhay
    • 2 недель назад

    Hi there, please do check mine, and am willing to revise if necessary.

    • 2 недель назад
    1. naefcom
      Организатор конкурса
      • 2 недель назад

      l liked that You have used the question to grab the reader attention at the beginning and at the end.

      could you add a pictures and puts headlines and font on your article.

      In the paragraph 2 and 3 you have just talk about obesity and how its happened but you did not mention anything about keep body fit.

      In the paragraph 5 and 7 you have used the word (cheat) and I prefer a positive expression.

      You have wrote a lot about appearance and a few about how the device work.

      in the last paragraph you need to rephrase the sentence and increase sentence to encourage the readers to use this invention.

      • 2 недель назад
  • naefcom
    Организатор конкурса
    • 2 недель назад

    I will put all my feedback in public to avoid these from future writers....

    • 2 недель назад
  • zaynraza49
    zaynraza49
    • 2 недель назад

    Check Entry 8 please. Feedback will be appreciated.

    • 2 недель назад
  • naefcom
    Организатор конкурса
    • 2 недель назад

    I am waiting more entries until the contest finish.

    • 2 недель назад
  • ashikur199660
    ashikur199660
    • 2 недель назад

    Asslamau alaikum please wait for me.

    • 2 недель назад
    1. naefcom
      Организатор конкурса
      • 2 недель назад

      ok

      • 2 недель назад

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