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Final Entry

Hi CH, This is my final entry for full view, hope you like it. Little amendments can be done on your suggestions if needed. Let's discuss more after you watch it. Please review this entry for motivation. Here is the link : https://drive.google.com/file/d/16QXmnyBCe4i1piK0pSIxP3a2CQTkNEox/view?usp=sharing Thank You


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                                     для                                         Neuraura Biotech Inc.,

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  • sandhyasvt
    sandhyasvt
    • 2 месяцев назад

    I want to give you the best but you have to select which is best for you among the choices given.

    • 2 месяцев назад
  • sandhyasvt
    sandhyasvt
    • 2 месяцев назад

    I will change the font size as well and trying for voiceover too. Are you ok to spend little extra ? maybe just $50. Let me know please. I have finalize someone two person for this job. Let me have your suggestion. If you ok with text to voice in the given sample or you need to hire the voiceover I have selected.

    • 2 месяцев назад
  • sandhyasvt
    sandhyasvt
    • 2 месяцев назад

    Thank You for all the comments.. Will work on it and get back to you soon.

    • 2 месяцев назад
  • Neuraura
    Организатор конкурса
    • 2 месяцев назад

    Around 2:51 "For doctors it means an accelerated diagnostic process..." again, there's a jolt/skip in the narrative and music. What's that from?

    • 2 месяцев назад
  • Neuraura
    Организатор конкурса
    • 2 месяцев назад

    Font of subtitles is too large. Pleas use a smaller font so that it's less distracting.

    • 2 месяцев назад
  • Neuraura
    Организатор конкурса
    • 2 месяцев назад

    "this is where neuraura comes in." then there's a jolt/skip in the music/video? what's that from? at around 1:30, the text says "...the lives of 1000s of patients...." but the narrative says "one thousands of patients" instead of "thousands of patients"

    • 2 месяцев назад
  • sandhyasvt
    sandhyasvt
    • 2 месяцев назад

    Well I think voice is not annoying, If I add some spaces; it will be good. Script is too long according to 3 minutes and I can add voiceover instead but it will charge little. Large subtitles means "long subtitles" or font is bigger ? Please clear

    • 2 месяцев назад
  • sandhyasvt
    sandhyasvt
    • 2 месяцев назад

    Please explain, " saying ‘one thousands of patients’ - oh the joys of text to voice software and making mistakes."

    • 2 месяцев назад
  • sandhyasvt
    sandhyasvt
    • 2 месяцев назад

    I will do these changes as required. I wanted final changes from your side. I just wanted to confirm if you like the visuals and other things compiled.

    • 2 месяцев назад
  • Neuraura
    Организатор конкурса
    • 2 месяцев назад

    some of the team comments: voice is annoying, visuals are good, the overly large subtitles I find annoying. Overall not a disaster…definitely opens with a bang!
    saying ‘one thousands of patients’ - oh the joys of text to voice software and making mistakes.

    • 2 месяцев назад
  • Neuraura
    Организатор конкурса
    • 2 месяцев назад

    what's the point of having the slide show the narrative, as well as the narrative showing the exact same info and read out loud? "We are changing just that. With the support of worldwide experts and partners, we are building....."

    • 2 месяцев назад
  • Neuraura
    Организатор конкурса
    • 2 месяцев назад

    need a space between "Neuromodulation" alsoknown as....

    • 2 месяцев назад

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