review an "about us" paragraph

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I have a website I built for which I'm writing an "about us" section in which i want to highlight the story of our founder starting the company and what led to it's birth.

I would like you to review it and rewrite and/or fix it in a way to be presentable on the website.

We are a company that sells rebar detailing services to civil engineering companies, so we are in the B2B area.

Please find attached a file containing the text I have written myself.

Since I decided to make it in the format of a contest, I will choose the best one i find.
However, since we are an up and coming start-up, winning this would guarantee you a lot of work in the future.

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  • Global Textware
    Global Textware
    • 2 месяцев назад

    Please check #41

    • 2 месяцев назад
  • peterhakem
    peterhakem
    • 2 месяцев назад

    hello, i am asking about 1) what type services does Rebar Express offers for civil engineering companies ? 3D detailing ,drawings, estimation.
    2) if any sample drawings to attach to about us ?
    3)How many projects completed and where the are located ?
    4) your work standards , software tools Ex. Autocad ?
    5) number of emloyees ??

    • 2 месяцев назад
  • MegstarB
    MegstarB
    • 2 месяцев назад

    I'd like to say that I think your work is quite good to begin with. I could edit it bit I don't think it needs much changing.

    • 2 месяцев назад
  • Global Textware
    Global Textware
    • 2 месяцев назад

    Please check #20

    • 2 месяцев назад
  • joydeepghosh1976
    joydeepghosh1976
    • 2 месяцев назад

    Request contest holder to increase prize #increaseprize . check #8

    • 2 месяцев назад
  • mdomene
    mdomene
    • 2 месяцев назад

    I would like to know, what was Mr Karl's set to graduate? It seems like he changed to Micro Engeeniring from something else after his experience in the Rebar business. But it's unclear.

    I would like to know if he changed universities or not too.

    • 2 месяцев назад

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