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The conspiracy

This story tells about the events and conspiracy that was happening in the background from the making of Knights Templars till their fall, and what is happening now.

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  • RhapsodeMonolith
    Организатор конкурса
    • 3 месяцев назад

    Hello.
    Thank you for your entry.
    The story have some interesting points, but I especially don't like how its constructed the narration.

    • 3 месяцев назад
    1. Dreamchas8r
      Dreamchas8r
      • 3 месяцев назад

      Thanks for your feedback. I too feel that the narration has gone bland. Anyways, if you want to use it, let me know, I'll rewrite it.

      • 3 месяцев назад