Write a short story related to the fall of the Knights Templar

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  Организатор конкурса

  • 5 месяцев назад

  Hello.
  Thank you for your entry.
  It has good parts, but it's insufficient. Sorry.

  • 5 месяцев назад
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     chaotictheory

     • 5 месяцев назад

     Thank you for your feedback! If its possible, could you let me know what was insufficient so I can improve in the future? Thanks in advance!

     • 5 месяцев назад