Can you edit and proof read my website page? The word count is around 1,500 words.
I am looking for you to
1. Keep my voice
2. Use an inverted pyramid style of presentation. Give an overview or summary right off the bat, clearly communicate the direction of my discussion.
3. Write to communicate, not to impress how smart I am.
4. Use short, snappy, active words.
5. Short Sharpe snappy paragraphs (2-3 sentences, 4 max)
6. Cut-cut-cut to the bone. Remove all extraneous material
7. Important: Break up the page with subheadings at just the right moment. Keep my reader moving down the page.
Please note. If you need to reorganize the content please do so and make it flow better. The most important part of the edit is to retain my voice.
please take a look at the attached document. I would prefer if you can provide an example of how you will edit the first two paragraphs and if I like it I can then make my mind and choose you to complete the edit otherwise it is difficult for me to choose who to go with.